tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7867081262675426242.post3011028978151775897..comments2023-09-06T21:14:55.006+10:00Comments on Whining at the World: Write on Wednesday - Write the musicE.http://www.blogger.com/profile/04660326954591560370noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7867081262675426242.post-45423123569385962692011-07-17T16:51:39.849+10:002011-07-17T16:51:39.849+10:00Maybe the start of a screen play??? I wonder what...Maybe the start of a screen play??? I wonder what they look like! Thanks for dropping past houseofprowse too!Kristy Prowsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01955912299442971932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7867081262675426242.post-11197739512210309312011-07-16T23:16:05.885+10:002011-07-16T23:16:05.885+10:00I'm glad I wasn't the only one scraping in...I'm glad I wasn't the only one scraping in at the eleventh hour this week. I managed to post my link late Friday as well.<br /><br />I like this snippet of dialogue. It made me wonder what had gone before - was this a continuation of a conversation or the start of one with the first speaker sort of thinking out loud only to be countered by the second speaker.<br /><br />It would be interesting to have some indication of the tone of the speakers. A often speak in a similar way with a good friend, however we are always joking around with lots of smiles and eye rolling and humour in our tone. the dialogue would read differently if the words were short and sharp.Susan Whelanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18253437044745874795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7867081262675426242.post-44931766575106067082011-07-16T13:42:53.760+10:002011-07-16T13:42:53.760+10:00I enjoyed reading your stuff. Hope to read more of...I enjoyed reading your stuff. Hope to read more of yours next week too.<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting on my efforts.Sanchyeta Srivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13174445319179490226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7867081262675426242.post-492529112342092652011-07-16T00:00:59.198+10:002011-07-16T00:00:59.198+10:00Oh cool, glad you linked up! Yes, I am keeping the...Oh cool, glad you linked up! Yes, I am keeping the linky open till late Friday now - gives us all a bit more time.<br /><br />I love how you couldn't do the first song, that you wanted to write the lyrics! Your piece did remind me of a few of your others. The use of dialogue is interesting to me. Full of energy and feeling, I like that.<br /><br />GillInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.com